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The Overflowing Bra

Bubs
Bubs's Monkey's Paw Shorts
A few shorts I wrote on 4chan in a Monkey's Paw thread. A mix of fetishes here. They all get happy endings. 
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Svin
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
The fetishes on display mostly weren't my thing, but you're a good writer. I would like to see you post more content here!
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