Obstetrician Dr. Franklin is perplexed when his patient, Anna, decides in the middle of labour that shes not ready to give birth and instead would prefer to keep being pregnant... indefinitely.
Authors note: This is a heavy pregnancy themed story, with some BE on the side and pretty much zero "sexual content" beyond the descriptions of bodies.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.00
- BE: 3.67
- Characters: 4.33
- Technical: 5.00
Bubs
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Normally I prefer more realism in my medical based stories, but once Anna undialated because she wanted to, I realized this was more of a comedy and enjoyed it for what it was. I especially loved how she was using his advice in ways that were technically true, but not how he intended. Like having Bugs Bunny as a patient. My one quibble is that I thought the bellies were expanding too quickly. Or maybe I'm wrong and children really do grow that quickly.
OdysseusII
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
Normally really enjoy your stories, and I'm a big fan of hyperpregnancy, but the constant drumbeat of my body, my choice and talk about ignoring biology and the like feels like some weird parody of how the far right views feminists
deux anges
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Greatly enjoyed this. I do love stories with hyperpregnancy and BE. General pacing was good and essentially free of typos. Looking forward to the next installment.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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