Two strangers awake in a mysterious abandoned facility and have to work together to escape.
Authors note: In case the title didnt make it clear, this is a Vore themed story, so if that icks you...well you were warned. Second of my expanded tidbits.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.00
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 4.00
- Technical: 4.80
scallion
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Really loved this and hope you continue it!
LoreVore
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 4
Not my bad, but decent writing. Characters and descriptions could use some more work. Also remember this is a breast expansion story site The Definitive BE Story Archive, not a vore site. Might want to find somewhere else to post things like this in the future.
DrTopper
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I'm glad you continued this one. The one thing that always bothered me with vore was how on earth people could swallow others whole, so the mad science experiment explanation really works for me here. Love height growth, and I hope you return to this story, just so I can see her bigger! and learn the truth behind their capture
Rev
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Also not a vore fan, but the scenes were written comically enough that it was not much different from a normal tale with violent elements. Nonetheless it was my favorite story of your mini collection and I enjoyed the longer version.
cman
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Not normally my sort of thing, but I wound up enjoying it!
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