James Bertram is forcibly brought to the ER with strange symptoms; an incredibly engorged cock that refuses to go down. Lucky for him he's got a good nurse to take care of him... Authors Note: The tidbit that I received the most requests to continue was "Cock Loving Nurse" and so, as a man of the people, I did just that. Hope you enjoy
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 4.40
- Characters: 4.80
- Technical: 4.60
flies
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
excellent. light on BE but whatever who cares.
cman
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Loved it. Ridiculous greed at its finest.
Red stone fan
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Other than the character's friend towards the end having what I feel should have happened to the main character, this was pure fantasy fuel that perfectly fit my exact kinks. Well done!
wildcards
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
This was a surprisingly enjoyable read, which checked many boxes.
Quick in pace and progression of the overal story, easy to follow.
The end however, felt a bit lacking, may be a bit rushed, brought to a closure to quickly. But then again, it could have just be an issue in my head, to eager to read more and have the story continue and spiral out of control even further.
HyperPenisFan
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Oh wow, I love a good Penis Expansion story! Too bad he reverts to a smaller size in the end! But this was great!
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