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The Overflowing Bra

Roommate Screening, Ch. 03 - A Slut Screen Story
Darren tries to keep things platonic with his increasingly busty roommate as the Slut Screen epidemic runs rampant around them.
Note: This chapter doesn't have any BE, but the previous and following chapters do!
Average Scores:

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I'm not as much a stickler for BE I enjoy the mindcontrol stuff a lot too, but the tempo of the story was weird because each prior chapter had a 'screening'.  Also, it's just personal preference but I prefer slower releases with more chapters rather than lots of subdivided entries. I wish this site let authors upload chapterstyle like a few other sites do so if a new chapter was uploaded, it'd appear on recent but then be easily linked back to the full story.
Overall= 5, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
I can't wait for the next one.  Absolutely great series imo.
Overall= 3, BE= 1, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
It was frustrating to read a chapter of one of my favorite new BE series, only to find no BE at all. I feel as frustrated as Darren does in this. 
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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