For every story I complete and post, there are two that I start and never finish. Some of them I get further along than others. Within are a collection of some of those drafts. (I was doing a purge of my hard drive and thought I might as well post them rather then fully delete them) Please keep in mind that theyre unfinished and just drafts, so they havent received my normal editing. If youre reading one and think there may be something worthwhile there or you really wanted to see how one would end, let me know and I may take another crack at it.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 5.00
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 4.75
DrTopper
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I wrote a big long winded thoughts on each one last night, but this site killed it... so this time I'll try to be brief. Alien pregnancy could work if you rework the height growth, nurse could be even better if both nurses were cock obsessed and both secretly sexed up and drugged up the patient without either of them knowing, and don't give up on the vore story only because you think it might be too niche. All the stories were good!
udog
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Corset seems like a premise that hasn't been done much. Would love to see how that one would end.
cman
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Wow, these really underscore how good a writer you are. Even unfinished, they're a joy to read. I absolutely adore the nurse story the idea of him being physically restrained, while the nurse is the one with the obsession really adds another layer to the concept for me. I would love to see where it would lead!
Ty
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Outstanding! Nurse and hotel are my favorites
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