The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Trogdor297
Mother Earth Yoga
Alexia goes to a new yoga class with her best friend Mandy. She finds the experience...fulfilling
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 BunnyMoon
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4 
Very much enjoyed this story! Thank you so much for sharing! I only noticed one tiny typo.
 DrTopper
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Was hoping Alexia would have gone down the route of Gaia in the end in terms of body shape and growth, but I really enjoyed the visualization of the meditative growth.
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