The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

The Emancipation of Mallory, Ch4
Mallory gets a humiliating lesson from Madison on what a "real" H-cup is.  Then after sulking for a week gets some practical revenge to reset her track.  
Average Scores:

Overall= 4, BE= 1, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
No actual BE in this chapter, but I like the characters and look forward to more.

One thing I really miss is that neither character has a defined bra size, so the BE in the series so far is hard to catch.

The prequel story looks interesting as well.
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