Enclosed within are the written transcripts documenting the recovered video footage found within the wreckage of Dr. Cynthia Lennox's laboratory, home of the infamous trial of "Formula 078125". (This was my entry to the Maternal Pressure contest over at Swell Tales that's now concluded. Main focus beyond BE is cumflation)
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.75
- BE: 3.75
- Characters: 4.25
- Technical: 4.75
Alyzero
Overall= 5, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Always great to see your stuff, but feels like the BE was sort of an afterthought here. I get that not every story written for another site will map perfectly on to the concept here, but I just prefer your other work more. Still high quality, if you're into the description.
Belover76
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
You know I love your stuff. All I can say is I'd love a spinoff exploring the lives of the staff after leaving.
cman
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Love it! Would have loved more exploration of the largest size, but the concept is fantastic! Your stories are so good
wildcard
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Really enjoyed reading this log recording style of story telling.
Time progressions, sufficient clarity what took place, easy to follow and pleasing read.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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