My take on the classic 'magic board game causes expansion' plot line. Contains breast expansion via lactation, giantess growth, shrinking and some tame magical control of others. If you have feedback or ideas for future stories, don't hesitate to comment!
If you like my work, find me on DeviantArt & SwellTales as OphirExpansion.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.60
- BE: 4.50
- Characters: 4.70
- Technical: 4.70
Anon4some1
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I love this trope and it was a good story, but it was a little short and the expansion was too fast in my opinion.
majister
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Love this trope, great story overall, though a bit on the short side more due to wanting more than the story being all that short.
Doobya
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I'm just super into luck on the drawmagical boardgames and yours was a fun read. Surprised it was this short... Really liked how the enchantments interacted with each other.
Would love to read a continuation
Doobya
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I'm just super into luck on the drawmagical boardgames and yours was a fun read. Surprised it was this short... Really liked how the enchantments interacted with each other.
Would love to read a continuation
Sole
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Fantastic but short! Part 2 soon please !
wildcards
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Short story, which reached its ended way too soon when reading. Looking forward of a part two, to be merged with the first one.
J4ck00
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Short and straight to the smut. Lays out the characters and then gets straight into the fun. Nice.
lardbiscuit
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great stuff! Hit on almost all my kinks. One of my faves!
anon
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
An excellent entry to the category, and a personal favorite of mine from your set since it's an allfemale cast. Nothing against men, but for this kind of content I much prefer not having them involved. I hope we get a part two!
Bubs
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
That was pretty hot. I'm a sucker for these magic game stories. I wish it had gone on for longer and everyone got more than one transformation each. Maybe in the sequel?
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