This is a short story about the girl Marilou. Her tits grow unexpectedly.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 1.13
- BE: 1.00
- Characters: 1.00
- Technical: 1.00
THEM
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Why was this even posted?
bobGrimer
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
I suspect the author has a humiliation fetish and we're feeding into that by giving such negative reviews. Or perhaps this was an exercise to see if you could write like a non English speaking toddler?
Anon
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
You know... you never want to discourage people from writing no one should be denied the chance to express themselves artistically. That being said, there is absolutely nothing redeeming here. It fails in every way and you honestly need to work on everything characters, story, descriptions, etc. Try harder and good luck.
OdysseusII
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Jesus this was bad. Was tempted to give a two on enjoyment because of how laughable it was, but decided not to
OmniTrixie
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Mafia Titman
Overall= 2, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Gnarl
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Just bad. Possibly ESL author.
Duh
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
You should probably not be on this site, son.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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