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Austin Powers
Time adn Again Part 1
WEll, after a 25 year hiatus, Austin Powers is back with his second story.

What of you could change your fate?  What if all you needed was a diary, an ink well and an old pen...
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Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
I like these reality altering stories,  I'm keen on reading the next few chapters. As with previous diary entries from previous writers, this diary and story has to potential go bad and backfire, of epic proportions 
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Welcome back! I'm excited to see it continue, see how Hayley continues to grow and anyone else blessed by Rob, and what other directions four more pages can take.
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