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Perfect Girlfriend Juice Ch. 5 "The Gold-Digger" (Part 1)
A middle-aged gold-digger tries to use the Juice to snag herself a rich young CEO, but things do not go as planned...
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Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Heck yeah, happy to see this series continue. I'm assuming the spicier stuff is on your patreon  fair enough! I like how you write the bimbobrainwashing aspects. Not entirely horrifying, not just fetish fuel, but something between the two. That works really well for me. Loved the dommy amazon aspects in this one, and the series as a whole has a lot of variety, which I like because it leaves me guessing kind of transformation we're in for each chapter. Technically, the writing is very good, but I would appreciate a little more time dwelling on the physical changes. Thanks for sharing!
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I really enjoyed this, though I wish the story had been a bit longer to flesh it out.  I'd love to see this turn into a series.  There's not much minigtsfmg stories out there and this really fill that niche.  Nice work!
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