The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Jen Boobs
Becoming Jen Becoming Chloe
A BE-obsessed writer writes her own expansion story, starring herself, hoping it might come true if she hits "upload".
Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Very good work! I hope there is a chapter two coming.
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
One of the best stories on here  it's so juicy with potential for more.
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I really enjoyed it, though it felt like it ended pretty abruptly, and I wish there was some more elaboration on her figuring out her new life and enjoying her fantasies
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Fantastic, really excellent. Only quibble is that all of the growth is implied, as opposed to onscreen, but everything else about the descriptions of Jen's massive new tits is incredible.
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Well this story was a surprise treat! It is so incredibly wellwritten. I always enjoy a story that highlights the true struggle that such oversized endowments would cause, and this pushed very single button in the best way. Is this a oneoff, or is there a chance for more?
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