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The Overflowing Bra

The Red Stone Chapter 7
Hey, I'm really sorry for the delay unfortunately I was stuck in bed with covid for the last few weeks. If you want more information i explained myself a bit more thoroughly over on deviantart (Adain77). I've also included the full version of the story, which I've partially rewritten and edited to the best of my ability, to make it a bit more readable.

Thank you for your understanding.
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Red stone fan
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
The characters were a bit more difficult to follow as to who was saying what, but another great chapter. Also, to be fair, you never did specific which Monday you would release it on haha. Hope you're on the mend. This series has had me visiting this site purely for the next chapter way more frequently than normal. Keep doing what you're doing!
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I sometimes get lost and forget who has what transformation lined up, but it's very fun to read. The transformations are also super unique and I love the variation from expectations. I really do look forward to each release.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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