The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Miss Midwest Milker
18 year old farm girl Lily is eager to follow in her mother's footsteps and compete in the Miss Midwest Milker competition.  

Authors note:  This is one of the stories I started but never finished during my hiatus.  Thought it deserved to see the light of day so I sat down and finished it.
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A Reader
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Loved this story. I know others have said this but the off screen growth was great. I'd love to see some sort of continuation, though I admittedly have no idea how that could be done in a narratively satisfying way. 
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This story turned out nothing like I expected it to, and I mean that in a good way. I love a good mother daughter growth story.
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
This story combined some of my favorite elements  competitive growth, lactation, calorie fueled growth, etc. Also the rate at which you write quality content is quite amazing. 
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
While I normally prefer onstage growth, your descriptions and characters more than make up for the growth being off stage.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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