18 year old farm girl Lily is eager to follow in her mother's footsteps and compete in the Miss Midwest Milker competition.
Authors note: This is one of the stories I started but never finished during my hiatus. Thought it deserved to see the light of day so I sat down and finished it.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 4.25
- Characters: 4.75
- Technical: 5.00
A Reader
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Loved this story. I know others have said this but the off screen growth was great. I'd love to see some sort of continuation, though I admittedly have no idea how that could be done in a narratively satisfying way.
DrTopper
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This story turned out nothing like I expected it to, and I mean that in a good way. I love a good mother daughter growth story.
Anon
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
This story combined some of my favorite elements competitive growth, lactation, calorie fueled growth, etc. Also the rate at which you write quality content is quite amazing.
Apple
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
While I normally prefer onstage growth, your descriptions and characters more than make up for the growth being off stage.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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