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The Overflowing Bra

thecrfan
Bored
I've been playing around with some AI assisted story creation on Spicychat. It often descends into mindless repetition, but occasionally a coherent story comes through. I cleaned this up slightly, but here's what it came up with following some prompts. There was a weird section at the end where things started catching on fire that I cut, but this seemed like a decent ending spot.
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OdysseusII
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Why should I read something someone couldn't be bothered to write?
CrashO
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Ridiculous that you can put AI drivel on this site at all.
Guest
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 2
This wasn't great.  That being said, it's not bad for something that is ai generated.  For those of us who aren't good wordsmiths, this eventually can be a way we can contribute to this site.  I would keep tinkering and do a bit more editingproofreading after you finish generating the story and see where that takes you.
beltar
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
If you couldn't be bothered to write it, why should I bother to read it? 
leave
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
don't subject others to your machinemade trash
No to AI
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
AI bullshit
2 cents
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 2
It'd be better if that were used as a jumpingoff point. Use it as a detailed outline to help you craft a better story. 
MrEcks
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Keep this AI drivel out of here
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