The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

The Machine
In the height of a fertility crisis, Dr. Amy Vickers has invented a solution. It works...a little too well.


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Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Overall really great story, if a little short. It was nice to kinda see you return to your roots so to speak with this story. And taking a break from the duke and the thief was a nice move. Such a long story deserves interludes. Id love to see a part two of this sometime if you have it in you. Keep up the good work.
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
It's been quite a while since I read a pregnancythemed story on this site. It was fantastic! You should do more along these lines. 
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Quite good. The main character is the quite amusing with their professionalism flip when they really understand what is going on and the support technicians showed empathy despite being one dimensional. The descriptions in the story are great and while there is one mistake with the writing where 'soft ball' is used instead of 'gym ball' but it does not detract from the story. It also ends in such a way that a sequel could be written, but I don't think the story needs it. Definitely worth a look.
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