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The Overflowing Bra

How I Met My Girlfriend
College freshman Dave tries online dating and is surprised to get matched with Jane, a cute girl so
like him in her interests that he almost can’t believe it. He is even more surprised when he begins to hallucinate a bustier, sluttier version of Jane in his hornier moments. What secret is Jane hiding? Who is this sultry alter-ego ‘Jade’ visiting Dave’s waking wet-dreams?
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Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great story and excellent character writing and descriptions. 
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Very enjoyable story, great example of show don't tell. Characters were well flushed out and fit in the universe without being well weird. Excited to see your future works. 
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