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The Duke and The Thief - Part 4
Months later Bryn is confronted with an unexpected opportunity.  

Authors note: Once again thank you all for the feedback, it really keeps me writing.  I do intend to write a part 5 but it will take me awhile as I'm still undecided how I want the next section to play out.  
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Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great story, please continue. I hope there will be more breast enlargements again, but I would also be happy about muscle growth, for me it could also be something extremely muscular, I think that could be easily integrated into the plot.
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
While I do miss the slow growth of the early chapters, it makes sense for the growth to kind of escalate in a story like this. I'm very much still enjoying this story.

If you're looking for some suggestions for where the story can go from here, I think how Bryn and Duke's half magic strength means Bryn will need something to even the odds against Hemfort. And since Bryn is a thief, it feels right that it should somehow involve stealing magic power. Perhaps some sort of lost relic or some new spell the duke was researching to steal magic from others this could be an explanation what the Duke does in his Study at night. Some of this would probably expand the scope of the story far more than you wanted to though. pun intended
I also hope Vantica and Sashy will end up going with Bryn on her adventure to save the Duke, if only because I just really love them as characters. lol

In any case, I love this story and can't wait to read the next part and your other stories in the future!
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I have enjoyed the focus on a greater narrative. I actually thought you'd make Bryn pregnant and timeskip a child being born but spoilers that's not the direction it took at all. Not dissapointed in the least, pregnancy is a common subject is all. You'd of tagged it anyway so I'm uncertain why I thought that might be where you took it. This has been a breath of fresh air for this little niche community and I'm glad you've been motivated to continue. 
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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