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The Duke and The Thief - Part 3
The epic continues with Bryn and the Duke entering the lair of their enemies.

Authors Note:  Just a heads up this chapter doesn't have much actual expansion, just plot and sex.  Part 4 is in the works!
Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Man I practically spedrun this story. I love some BE but how you manage to tell a throughly engaging and fantastic story at the same time is no short of inspiring. Looking forward to reading another 10 or more chapters of this story. I can't put it down and that's the best compliment I can possibly have for an author. 
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
best compliment i can give is that i m too tired to leave any feedback. Love me some overconfident Bryn with outsized juggs. I love that with her you stay at huge but manageable size, so that the rest of the story is believable. I wonder what happens next, will she learn to grow on her own and come back to woo Duke with her dream body ? 
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Some fun writing for all. Bryn has been a wonderfully sexy character but the powers of the Duke and meeting Lord Angus was just as fun. Thank you for the writings thus far. Look forward to more. 
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
wow, this series is levels above compared to your previous stories in terms of quality. Love Bryn, especially the scenes where she admires her own body. Hope now, she augments herself to her own hearts content.
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I am lovin this story! It's truly amazing when erotica is born from fantastic storytelling! Please, keep it going!
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Honestly, I had skipped on reading the first part of this story since I like bottomheavy women far more than topheavy ones and so a purely BEbased story didn't interest me, but when I saw the AG tag added to Part 2, I decided to give it a read. I'm beyond glad that I did, as Part 3, even without expansion, has some absolutely incredible writing as Bryn navigates her new massive behind. An absolute pleasure to read, and the story and character writing are fantastic too as has been mentioned before by other reviewers.

I do hope that we continue to get more butt expansion in later chapters, but regardless I will eagerly continue to read this series, if for no reason other than to see where the romance goes and for hopefully a bit more fun with the other maids. Keep up the awesome work!
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