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The Overflowing Bra

Trogdor297
The Duke and The Thief - Part 2
The tale of Duke Fenrod and Bryn continues. 

Authors note: I appreciate all those who offered suggestions, your feedback and praise means so much.  There will definitely be a part 3, and probably more.   
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TROGDOR297
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Responding to another review.  On this website HG stands for Hair Growth.  You're thinking LG for leg growth
height
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Story is flagged with hg for height growth. I wish it happens down the line, we d love to see Bryn leggy like a model with that voluptuous body
HighSocietySlut
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
oh good god this is hot. I love how ambitious the main character is. I kind of wish she d go around seducing men women absolutely enjoying her enhanced body.
Cilegodem
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
is good, plz more
DrTopper
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I really hope that Vantica and Sashy end up growing bigger too in one of the next parts! 
Sincerity
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Oh, an excellent followup. I definitely enjoyed the bit with Vantica and Sashy, and this whole plot of this dangerous outing!
Joanna Juggz
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
id like to say i love this story and where it's going and id love to chat about it if you email me at jwill297gmail.com
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