TheClause2007@yahoo.com
Chapter 5 is here! This time with a few more transformations ;-D
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.50
- BE: 5.00
- Characters: 4.50
- Technical: 5.00
Red stone fan
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Much more along the lines of chapter 13 and definitely a solid 4.5 score for me. The transformation was certainly unexpected but all the same fun. The continual revenge plot is a positive but I think it might be getting worn out a tad. My favorite feature of this whole series is the clearly consentual, but still nonconsentual aspect of most of these transformations. Like obviously she would want to be what she turned into but the benefit of it's effects are still positive and throughout this series has been what I think I've enjoyed the most. Inconvenient pleasure provided by malicious intent has been wonderful.
Also your imagination is outstanding! Keep up the good work and hot damn, your churning these out fast!
bobGrimer
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Definitely on the weirder side and unique but quite enjoyable too. This is my favourite series right now.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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