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Danny wakes up after his strange dream and wonders what it could mean. In the meantime, Annie has scored herself and Danny invites to a Saturday pre-drinks. There's only one catch: it's for women only! Whatever will Danny be able to do?
Comments and ratings are welcome. Part one included in the upload. To be concluded in part three!
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 4.40
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 5.00
khfdtijdstuhch
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great story. Can't wait for the next part.
Anon
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I hope you continue it soon
bigbustgazer
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Love your work! So glad you're back. You should think about posting your stuff on more places than just here, tgstorytime and FictionMania would both be great fits for your stories.
Anon
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
You're back! Can't wait for the conclusion!
Nickname
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Love your style. Loads of description, great pov. Characters are fun but don't bog stuff down. Can't wait for continuations of all your series.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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