TheClause2007@yahoo.com
Chapter 3 is here, I'm sorry it took so long but here it is. Unfortunately, it is also the smallest chapter so far, but don't worry chapter 4 should be up sometime next week.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.33
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 4.00
- Technical: 4.00
JM the elephant
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Seriously a great series on this site. I typically don't care for multichapter epics, but this story is really turning out fantastic. I hope for another several chapters but anything additional will be exciting to read. I literally only have reviewed this story to give praise as well. It's so damn good.
Opailopai
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
This continues to be a fun read and it's worth checking out along with the first 2 chapters for anyone that hasn't. I'm hopeful that the author will give it an editing pass when 4th chapter is done or when the story is finished since it's extremely close to being genuinely great erotic TF fiction.
Wisewhale21
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Really enjoyed the story so far! Bit of a shift towards the more sadistic, hoping it shifts back to being friends goofingplaying around. Otherwise a great story with weird and fun transformations
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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