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My Best Friend Became a Witch Part 1
Daniel and Annie had always been close. So close, in fact, that it wasn't uncommon to assume they were dating. However, as their lives continued and they entered college, Annie became obsessed with WAP, a society of women dedicated to some mysterious cause. One day, Annie approaches Daniel and offers to tell him the truth, the whole truth, and nothing but the truth about WAP. What follows changes the course of Daniel's life forever.
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Fantastic. Can't wait for more. 
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I really loved the story. Everything is developing in a nice and interesting way, the pace is fast enough to stay interested and detailed enough to enjoy, and the setup is interesting as well.
I'm looking forward to seeing how this story progresses, and how their relationship will change.
Thank you for the time you put into this story.
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I really like this, I hope you continue 
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