Josie and Charlie are coworkers who each notice an usual tingling, and begin to grow as they grow closer together. This is just the beginning.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.80
- BE: 4.80
- Characters: 4.70
- Technical: 4.30
Anon4Some1
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Really nice growth pacing and nice characters I cant wait for the next parts!
Anon4Some1
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Really nice growth pacing and nice characters I cant wait for the next parts!
Anon4Some1
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Really nice growth pacing and nice characters I cant wait for the next parts!
bobGrimer
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
My only complaint is that there isn't more to read. Please, do continue.
chargerse67
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Keep it coming ! great start.
Icecrow
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Sorry about the auto correct. meant to say that I really like how wholesome this is
Ty
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Tremendous!! Living my dream thru your story!
Physike
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Icecrow
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Love the slow growth and love the use of proper messurement. Also really Siggi G hlé Wholesome this is, keep it up.
Shsas
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Loved the beginning of this story. Slow and steady growth. Looking forward to the next part.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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