The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Planetary Pals
A story long in the making, Fitzbattleaxe's Judy Wall of "New Beginnings" meets artist Berggie's April for an expansion-filled tale. Included is art by Mariano Navarro and Hernan Cabrera.
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Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
This is literally the exact type of thing I love and wish there was more of. Joyful, uninhibited, not too graphic, starting somewhat realistic and reaching ridiculous heights without losing focus on why we're all here. I could picture the whole thing in my head because of previous artwork of April and Judy, the story perfectly matches its tone. Bravo. One small glitch, you describe April's finger as yards long when she is 30 feet tall...that'd be a pretty loooong finger. Pepending on how much it matters to you it didn't detract from the story you could use the giantess converter to get reasonably accurate measurements. Great work tho!
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