Tracy has an unrequited crush on Tyler, and so she resorts to Perfect Girlfriend Juice to ensure that she becomes his Perfect Girlfriend.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.00
- BE: 3.00
- Characters: 4.00
- Technical: 5.00
Bubs
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Ok, I have to give you props for making an erotic story a parody of a popular song. I laughed when I got all the references. The story is fine. I could have used more descriptions of the size, like how wide her hips were or the size of her boobs.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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