An arrogant guy gets forcibly reincarnated into a maid, in another world. As if that’s not enough, her new breasts keep slowly growing…
A fun little romp with slow, tender growth.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 2.75
- BE: 3.25
- Characters: 2.25
- Technical: 2.50
asdf
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Micycle
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 3
It's not even a story, it's just an excerpt from a story that the author wants you to go buy on smashwords.
Loui Montbaten
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 3
Mrmanandu
Overall= 3, BE= 5, Characters= 1, Technical= 3
The whole thing felt really... surreal. Like I understand that this is a piece of fetish work and it's supposed to play into a fantasy, but part of that job is planting the fantasy into reality. This did not nearly do enough work to realise it's world and so it all feels like complete fiction and everything good was unbelievable to me, in a bad way.
On a technical note the story was short. Not always a condemnation but it was here. The story starts inmediares but only ever drops hints of what happened and where our character is. It's like if you took one of your favourite stories and lopped off the beginning and the end. Yes, you have the meat of the story still present and yes there's a lot of good expansion smut happening but since it's not encased in a good story it's hard to absorb it all.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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