Ethan takes his girlfriend and her bitchy friends out to a new club. The experience changes all of their lives but he's the only who notices.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.40
- BE: 4.30
- Characters: 4.40
- Technical: 4.40
noWayMan
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Lots of fake reviews, read the story its not a 5555, just lots of folks pushing this up for no reason.
TwiWolf
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Sorry, but I really can't understand why everyone else seems to be raving about this.
The story is fine and enjoyable, but the BE description is minimal and it's basically the same description three times in a row.
Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
One of the best Ive read on the site. Would love to see this idea expanded on. Sequel, spinoffs. Different people going to the club with different scenarios and motivations. My imagination goes wild
Anon
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Lahey
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Bro.. Absolutely fantastic story.
The Martian
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great story. Good pacing, descriptions and development of the relationship between the characters. Loved the subtle idea that it mattered who entered together as to how the effect changed them and their view of each other over time.
NakNak90
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Absolutely nailed it, more like this would be fantastic.
Some guy
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Really enjoyed this one, great story. Very hot and fun
Annonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Fantastic story. I love stories that work out well with a happy ending for everyone.
DrKnow
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Probably my favourite of all of your stories to date! The expansion detail is definitely a notch above!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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