The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

SpartacusDA
Bridget
My new girlfriend has quite the appetite, how big will she get?


(Contains: Stuffing, Mini-Giantess, Lactation)
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cman
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
A very fun read, but I feel like it was either rushed, or stopped too early.  I liked the flashforward teasing, but I wanted some payout at the end where we spent time with them in the present, enjoying each other.
anon
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
It's more of a snippet than a story. Bland characters, no real plot other than she's growing, and the flashback structure doesn't really do much for it.
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