My new girlfriend has quite the appetite, how big will she get?
(Contains: Stuffing, Mini-Giantess, Lactation)
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.00
- BE: 3.50
- Characters: 3.50
- Technical: 5.00
cman
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
A very fun read, but I feel like it was either rushed, or stopped too early. I liked the flashforward teasing, but I wanted some payout at the end where we spent time with them in the present, enjoying each other.
anon
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
It's more of a snippet than a story. Bland characters, no real plot other than she's growing, and the flashback structure doesn't really do much for it.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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