Caleb and Paige each have something they hate about their bodies. When they each get access to wishes that can only change each other, they try to change their partner to make them more compatible, but their wishes end up competing with each other. This is a slow burn story that tracks how their wishes affect their lives over a period of seven years.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 4.31
- Characters: 4.85
- Technical: 4.62
SoylentOrange
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
What an adorable story of bedroom miscommunication gone out of control. I really enjoyed the fact that all the changes were borne of genuine affection and concern for the other's wellbeing. It is a little light on descriptions of the growth because of the long time frame, but the repetition of common checkpoints in their lives helps. Overall, a hearty recommendation!
Bestarred
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
I just need to give a special thankyou for the line, We made the world weirder, for sure, but I think I became better. absolutely the perfect tone and the vibe on this story was incredible.
sportsinformation
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I think what I loved most about this story is that it's endearing, with friendly and not hostile interactions between the characters. There's not cruelty, just innocent misunderstanding.
wildcards
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Really enjoyed the story and I often enjoy slow burn stories combined with wishes cause more chaos and expansion then initially was intended.
It was well written and I'm looking forward to reading any future writing posted here.
Roid Abuser
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
I really enjoyed this story. The concept was a original, and I enjoyed how the protagonists had fondness for each other.
If I had to have any quibble and I'm reaching here to look for something, I'd like the protagonists describeuse their bodies a bit more, particularly the muscle growth of both and how they feel about their bodies.
Apple
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This was one of the best stories added to this site in quite a while. Please keep writing.
boob guy
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great concept and great writing!
Astheriom
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Love it! Hope to see more reality change in future works.
ActualAlias
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Very fun story and managed to ride the line between horny and cute expertly. good descriptions of size and shape but could have used a touch of extra detail at the very end. I thought the repeating motif of only one problem would wear thin but you were so creative on your realitywarping so keep them happy that it was a treat to see how you kept it going.
Torps
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
DrKnow
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Absolutely wonderful, my comments are basically the same as Left Bower's. Love the story. Please keep up the wonderful work.
Left Bower
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
So thrilled to see someone take inspiration from my absolute favorite stories on this site. If every story here involved wishmaking and reality altering and milk, I could die happy. You did an amazing job working in this archetype. Would love to see more like this from you!
Joey Menzer
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Really fun read. Well done
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