The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

SpartacusDA
Nine Months
900 DeviantArt Watchers Special. A young woman has a strange reaction to getting pregnant. Her roommate is into it.

Contains feeding
Average Scores:
 OdysseusII
Overall= 2, BE= 1, Characters= 2, Technical= 4 
I agree with the other commenter on the taking advantage while drunk aspect. Also, there wasn't much description of the expansion, and the sex felt rushed and under described
 Bubs
Overall= 2, BE= 1, Characters= 2, Technical= 4 
An ok premise, but it never tells us how big any of the expansion is. I also wasn't comfortable with the implication that she takes advantage of her friend while drunk.
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