The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

SpartacusDA
Claire’s Sister
Claire and her sister have something in common…

A continuation of "Claires Testing"

Contains stuffing and stuckage.
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Random reader steve
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 4
Not a bad story. Mostly a slow growth or actually a shrinking story. I had high hopes for this. It got me thinking about the doorway scene in leprechaun 3. It is not like this. 
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