The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

SpartacusDA
The Amateur Masseur
A young man reunites with his childhood friend and first crush. She has an odd reaction to his loving touch.
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 Milkman
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Loved it!
 Anon
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4 
A southerner wrote this
 NICK
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
I really liked your story. Finally someone who keeps it to a more realistic size. Even though, it would have been fun to read more about how tight her clothes  tops became and so on. 
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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