Fantasy story, Melody is a mage with a special condition, affecting her whenever she casts a spell.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 2.00
- BE: 1.00
- Characters: 3.00
- Technical: 5.00
Sig
Overall= 2, BE= 1, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
No BE until the last 3 sentences in the story. Flows well and did seem any grammar mistakes.
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