As the name suggest, the story is written in a form of a diary. The growth is caused by overeating, so fair warning if it's something you don't like.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.00
- BE: 2.00
- Characters: 3.00
- Technical: 5.00
Bubs
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
Dear Blebleble, if I could offer you one bit of advice for your writing whenever your character says that her breasts have grown, or that someone's ass is huge, it is your responsibility to tell us HOW MUCH they have grown or HOW BIG the ass is. She keeps saying that her boobs have grown, but how much? How wide are they? How much do they stick out? Comparing their size to fruits and sports balls might be cliche, but it works.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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