The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Diva Plastica
Slime Knight - Chapter 1
A Paladin is taken over by a slime and turned into a sexy, buxom babe with breast implants made out of magic goo.

And then the new girl is ready to go on a sexy rampage to find more victims!

Part of a series.
Average Scores:
 4gen
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4 
liked the idea with the slime breasts implants but wnated it a little longer not bad overall nice
 Mdy
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1 
Not even kind of the whole story, this is literally an advertisement.
 Elias
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Wunderbar loved the BE and the slime usage! 
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