The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Wokod
Nothing Big
To say Kevin had a big crush on Ana was an understatement.
Average Scores:

flies
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
great premise, well rendered. Wouldn't have minded more of a payoff but the journey was fun anyhow!
Biggus
Overall= 1, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 2
The AI images really ruined it for me, if you really wanted to add illustrations to your story just commission an artist ffs
george41
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Loved it, would love to see more stuff like this in the future!
OM NOM NOM
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Always good to see a new Wokod story! This was pretty good and I hope we're going to see more stories from you in the near future.
Oldishy
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Heyyyy glad to see Wokod's back! Great story as always, and awesome AI stuff. Hope to see more soon!
Bob
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Loving the amount of illustrations used
wildcards
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Loved the story, illustration was the cherry on top.
How the story ended, leaves the door open for another chapter 
Rakki
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
One of the more fun writers in the community, not his best, but still an awesome read, if we could convince him to write more often...
ktc
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
It's clear they are AI generated but damn does it make a hot short. The final image has some anatomically estranged arms...but I didn't even notice at first. 
Decario
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Highly detailed illustrations accompanied by a really good story
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