A short story about visiting a cafe that employs a special type of server
(Made some changes so it reads better)
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.50
- BE: 3.50
- Characters: 4.00
- Technical: 4.50
Oldishy
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Very nice! You did a great job cramming a lot of character into Amy despite the brief nature of the story, she seems very sweet!
I do wish there were more physical descriptions though, and some more BE, but what was here was pretty good
I agree with the other user, this is worth a part two if you ever feel like doing that
Vertigo724
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
This needs follow up and could be a very fun series. There's enough in this first installment to get invested in the characters. Well done.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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