The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

A quick and dirty frantic expansion. Your goth ex rocks up at your house desperate for your cum! but each load makes her already voluptuous bod larger and larger!
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Fisk Prime
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
This was good, but it goes much too fast and could have been drawn out a bit. 
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Short but excellent energy overall. 
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Love cum induced growth. Definitely would have loved to see this drawn out longer, but it's a great short story.
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