A misread ingredient for a beauty potion results in some amplified effects that bring two roommates much closer together.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.00
- BE: 5.00
- Characters: 4.33
- Technical: 4.67
PlumperThumper
Overall= 2, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
MrEcks
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Always a pleasure to read your work. Can't wait for your next story.
Double H
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I loved it. Hoping for a sequel where we explore her body more.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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