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The Overflowing Bra

Fredricton3D
In for a Penny, In for a Pound (A Christmas Short Story)
Penny answers a job listing & is surprised to find out that the job is working in Santa's workshop at the north poll. But she'll find out too late that it's not toys that the elves want her to make.
(With a couple of images near the end)
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FrigOfFury
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
It wasnt a story that really spoke to my personal kinks despite my fondness for preg and lactation content, but I really enjoyed how cleverly the twist was hidden from the protagonist. In lots of stories like this one MC would have to be an absolute dunce not to notice the signs that they had badly misunderstood the situation, but it was really quite well explained in this story. I also enjoyed the general positivity of it.
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