Sam and his crew set off an a deep space exploration mission, alongside an unexpected new crew member with an incredible genetic enhancement.
Authors note: My apologies if this ends up being posted twice. I posted it once and it didn't show up so I'm reposting it. My longest story yet, bit of a slow burn at first but it ramps up quick. As always enjoy.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 5.00
Dylanpudding
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great writing, characters, a quality story plot. Keep it up!
Killfrog
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This has been my favorite so far.
cman
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Oarrhocks
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I really liked your story overall. The only critique I have is wishing for more 'onscreen time' describing the changes in more detail as they progressed before arriving back at the base at the end.
But great story!! Keep it up!!!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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