Jackie's boyfriend Dave is training to be a bodybuilder, and takes a prototype growth hormone to help him build muscle, a growth hormone that spreads through bodily fluids. It makes them grow in ways they did not expect.
Additional tags: Pussy growth, Cumflation.
Enjoy and as always, I appreciate feedback
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 4.50
- Characters: 4.83
- Technical: 5.00
Bob
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
A great story. I loved how both of them kept growing bigger and bigger, and how they both enjoyed it so much. Thanks!
HyperpenisFan
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Love a good story involving a penis expansion, hyperpenis, and pussy expansion. Your writing was so good it was like I was experiencing it myself!
cman
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Wow! Definitely your best so far. Again, really hitting those greedy notes that are so fun. Fantastic work!
Torque
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Best one so far. Only improvement I would suggest is a slightly slower burn. Take your time with the growth and changes, draw out the growth sequence a bit longer
GeoffK
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
A great story. Very hot and quite wellwritten.
Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Your best one yet, in my opinion. Hits all the right buttons, especially in regards to your descriptions of each transformation and their slow descent into madness driven by lust. Would love to see a sequel since this one ends in a cliffhanger. Either way, keep it up!
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