Greetings dearest reader. Submitted for your digestion is a 7.4k word tale of Breast Expansion and Stepfordization that I hope might thrill you. A fancy new bakery has opened in the small college town of New Billington and the sweet confections it sells do more than simply tantalize the taste buds. When a young white collar worker returns home to deliver good news he finds his wife to be a very different woman to the one he knew that very morning.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.00
- BE: 2.00
- Characters: 4.00
- Technical: 5.00
Some guy
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Very well written story, strong characters. Thanks! Nitpick is not much actual transformation that we get to witness though
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