A science experiment gone wrong transforms a boyish lesbian into a curvaceous cowgirl, and she is not happy!
Includes an illustration by Fenris North!
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.00
- BE: 3.00
- Characters: 3.00
- Technical: 4.00
aylamb
Overall= 1, BE= 2, Characters= 1, Technical= 3
Well, I can call it a win for equality that there can be femaleprotag stories on this site in the 'Emotional Manipulationdriven TF' subgenre. I'll say that I'm a harsher critic of noncon and mental changes, but this wound up feeling extra gross from the explicit acknowledgment that gaslighting was the goal, but not treating it as something devious or even taboosexy like some darker works can pull off. Just manipulation as means to an end that doesn't really make sense and doesn't have any meaningful in impact for characters that aren't fleshed out enough to feel good or bad about what's happened.
Some guy
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great story, well written, hot. Thanks!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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