The fully revised story (including a NEW FOURTH CHAPTER) of a very special libation. The Bride, the Groom, and their Maid-of-Honor indulge themselves the night before the wedding.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 5.00
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 4.67
aylamb
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
A fantastic continuation and rewrite. Honored you took the reviewer advice to heart because it pushes this over the top to one of my very favorite reads on this site. If I have one more note, it's the abruptness of the end here, but hopefully there's more to come! Whether there's more to this story or more stories in your head I'm eagerly awaiting seeing your name pop up on the Uploads page in the future.
Pop
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Very enjoyable, love the dynamic between the three main characters. Looking forward to Part 5!
Turt
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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