Quick, simple story about a girl's transformation through time.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.50
- BE: 4.50
- Characters: 3.00
- Technical: 4.50
Mrmanandu
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 2, Technical= 4
Close to a 45. The story begins with Titzzy recounting her high school life and what it was like growing big boobs. Which was my favourite part but in such a short story there was a lot of shortcuts taken with character development and each event highlighted had to push the story forward in a too rushed manner. It ends with a playbyplay of the prom where the opposite happens. So many character appear to have cathartic changes of heart and apologise for everything they've done and I just didn't care. It also voids the realism of the story by suggesting that she's suddenly growing in real time.
Final note by the end of the story it's suggested that she's over 60 inches around and 'outside the alphabet' which again eats at the realism for me. It's not in line with the rest of the stories realism levels to suggest that a school girl has breasts that big.
Globly
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Really liked this one! Great seeing Izzy go from outcast to prom queen. Definitely interested in seeing more like this.
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